Ok, I didn't add a lower body for the friend-guy, and I gave Hiromi a hat because she's missing half of her head. I somewhat removed the red marks on the window near Hiromi's face because they were blocking her out, and it didn't seem natural to have them semi-transparent.
Also, I fucked up on the proportions when resizing their faces.
I'll try to give Hiromi head but that'll take longer, so here's the first crap version, with one more crap version to come.
And yes, the pun was intended (even though I had to resort to ruining the grammar oh noes).