Thanks for being so receptive guys. I have to say, it's a real pleasure writing this thing most of the time. I think I've struck some sort of empathic cord with Amu here. She's got a beautifully twisted mind underneath all the cute girly frills and youthful innocence. Of course, she's about to become a rapist, but it's not really rape if she begs for more is it now?
Thanks again, all of you. I'll have chapter three up some time this weekend, I hope, and then chapter four soon after. Maybe I'll even get back to that monstrosity over on FF.net
(I know, fail and AIDS etc).