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You know how most porn doujins have at least some semblance of an interesting storyline (the younger sister who goes insane and locks her older brother up and fucks her while keeping a journal of her insanity for posterity) while a lot of western amateur drawn porn has absolutely shitty storylines? (Jag27. Just... Jag27. And gr0w. Fuck you, Bustartist, I'll steal what I want).

Anyway, Cannon God Exxxaion looks like the former but reads like the latter. The mangaka needs either keep his dick in his pants or make an honest hmanga out of the series.